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Oct 23 2008

Night Stalker-Relationships

Published by sunnflr at 6:46 am under flash fiction Edit This

This is my contribution to the Meme Express prompt. The word this time was sarcastic. I hope you like the way I worked it into the story. If you’d like to read the rest of the Night Stalker story, follow these links:

Night Stalker

Night Stalker-Remembrance

Night Stalker-The Children

Night Stalker-Clarissa

Nathaniel watched as Susan sauntered over to Jacob and lightly caressed his jaw with her fingertips. She then reached up and whispered something in his ear. It must have been something good judging by the look on Jacobs face. He quickly told Clarissa goodbye as he and Susan headed out the door.

With a pout, Clarissa watched them go. If it had been anyone other than Susan, Clarissa would have asked Jacob if she could go with them. But she knew children weren’t allowed in the places Susan went.

Nathaniel watched as she stared after them, her hands clenched into fists at her side. She had a crush on Jacob. Everyone knew it, but didn’t know what to do about it. Nathaniel thought it must be terribly hard for her. She was trapped in the body of a child, but had the sensual awareness of an adult. For even though Clarissa had no problem taking children, she still preyed far more often on adults. With their blood came their secrets, desires, and experiences.

Clarissa wasn’t the only one who was disappointed with the recent activities. As Nathaniel stepped out the door, he met Rissa. She was watching the departing couple with open animosity.

When she noticed Nathaniel standing there, she threw a biting look over her shoulder. Rissa was beautiful. Very beautiful, with flowing blonde hair, sky blue eyes, and a tight body that she showed off to perfection in short skirts and tank tops. The men in the group all salivated over her constantly. The problem was that Rissa only had eyes for Susan.

Nathaniel started to say something, but Rissa issued a sarcastic, “mind your own damn business,” before turning to go back inside.

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4 Responses to “Night Stalker-Relationships”

  1. sunnflron 23 Oct 2008 at 11:10 am edit this

    LOL, thanks. I’m trying!

    I really enjoy writing. I never even tried anything but poetry until a few months ago, but find that I like stories better.

    I am a member of the Accentuate Writers Forum. I’ve received alot of help there. You should check it out.

  2. cwilson26on 23 Oct 2008 at 8:06 pm edit this

    Love it! Now I can’t go anywhere Susan goes, huh? This is so cool you using our names like this. Can;t wait to read more! :)

  3. sunnflron 23 Oct 2008 at 8:23 pm edit this

    He He, Susan is a bad girl. Nobody should go where she goes.

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