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Oct 18 2008

Night Stalker

Published by sunnflr at 10:41 am under flash fiction Edit This

This is my contribution to the Weekend Wordsmith prompt. It’s my first vampire story.

Nathanial walked silently through the night. Stealth was necessary for his mission, and he’d perfected it long ago…so long ago. He couldn’t remember how many he’d killed. What they looked like, where they were from, who they were. None of that mattered. He could remember the sweet taste of their blood though. He could still feel it coursing in his veins all these years later. Each victim left their mark on his soul in this way.

Walking the streets of New York tonight, he was weary. Weary of the sameness of it all. There was no excitement anymore; no adventure. It was too easy. People were too complacent. They would walk right up to him in the alley. Never suspecting he’d be the last person they’d ever see.

When he sank his teeth into their neck, they looked as though they expected it. That nothing surprised them anymore. He often mourned the loss of innocence; the wonder that used to appear in his victim’s eyes as they died.

He saw the girl turn the corner. She never even slowed down. With a sigh, Nathanial took what was offered.

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6 Responses to “Night Stalker”

  1. dreamweaverron 18 Oct 2008 at 9:05 pm edit this

    Makes me want to hear more.

  2. sunnflron 20 Oct 2008 at 5:19 am edit this

    Thank you all! I hadn’t thought to do more with it, but I might try. I’ve never did a vampire story before at all so it would be something new to continue with it.

  3. Tomon 28 Oct 2008 at 12:17 pm edit this

    I told ya I’d show up and read…
    your faithful reader is appeased!

  4. sunnflron 28 Oct 2008 at 1:12 pm edit this

    LOL, thanks, Tom. Glad you stopped by.

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